An East meets West Romance

Title: The Gentleman’s Gambit
Author: Evie Dunmore
Published: December 2023, Berkley

I don’t think I’ve anticipated a book this much since the Harry Potter series. I loved the previous novels in Dunmore’s excellent League of Extraordinary Women series, and the fourth and final, featuring the booking Catriona, one seemed to be ages coming.

Everyone who read the series so far expected Catriona to land up with the Duke of Montgomery’s brother, Peregrin, who she had helped out in the first novel. However, Dunmore revealed in the run-up to the book’s release that Peregrin wouldn’t be the hero of this story, after all.

Instead, Dunmore introduces a stranger – from the East. As Catriona tells her nursemaid turned chaperon Mackenzie

There are three kinds of stories: a man goes on a journey; a stranger comes to town; and a man hunts a whale…Where are the women in this?… Women rarely leave town. Our stories tend to begin with the arrival of the stranger.”

To which Mackenzie mutters:

Yer hunting plenty of white whales in yer study …There’s yer story, no need for an entanglement with an outlander.

Indeed. Catriona is the daughter of an earl, whose estate is crumbling, and so should have been found a wealthy husband. Instead her father – after a truncated attempt at turning her into a lady by sending her to boarding school – has encouraged her academic ambitions. She is, he says as he sends her off to Oxford with said stranger to pore over artifacts, “my best man”.

Catriona meets this stranger in the most ignoble way possible – without a her clothes on. She is literally naked before him, and therefore he knows “she was a woman too”. This rhetorical device is shocking, but also necessary. Catriona is so controlled and closed up that the only way to really see her is to strip away her metaphorical defences. With Elias, we get to see the various facets shimmering under Catriona’s tightly wound control.

When Elias Khoury, ostensibly visiting Professor Campbell, Catriona’s father, first sets eyes on Catriona, he believes she is a selkie, the mythical shapeshifter of Scottish lore. He sees her without the high-necked dresses with their stiff collars and the tartan shawl she wraps tightly around her so the world – especially the academic world – will see a scholar, not a woman.

Catriona only sees a Peeping Tom and is outraged, but later she feels the telltale signs of attraction in her belly. For a woman so controlled, Catriona has no say on who she feels the spark of attraction to. This has happened three times in the past, all unrequited, and she is determined not to cultivate false hope.

Of course, Elias decides to woo Catriona with a game of chess and of course he finds himself impossibly distracted. He has an ulterior motive – to wiggle his way into her affections to get to her father, but he finds himself in too deep.

A gentleman would have left her alone in her fortress, yet here he was, his muscles humming with the desire to scale the walls.

Catriona meanwhile is practising “emotional innoculation”, exposing herself to the virus of affection in small doses in the hope that her body will someone overcome it. Yeah, that worked. (*insert eyeroll*).

Her chaperone is not fooled:

“It’s not the chess,” Mackenzie said with a speaking glance. “It’s whatever else is being played. The gentleman was rather flirtatious.”
Catriona’s brows pulled together. “We discussed the effect of international capitalism on women’s position in society.”
“That’s right.” Mackenzie nodded gravely. “Sweet music to your ears.”

Elias has an agenda: to return to the East artefacts that have been stolen by wealthy Westerners. Basically, the Elgin Marbles story. Or the Kohinoor. I have never cared too much about the Kohinoor. I think its return would be symbolic, but hardly alleviate the suffering of people who could have benefited from its wealth. I also think about origins and how far back you have to go to decide whether a thing belongs to a people. Does the Kohinoor belong to “India” or the southern region it originally came from? Does it belong to the descendants of the ruler of the time, or the local people, and who are they?

The Elgin Marbles are simpler -they were carved onto a particular wall in a particular location and a chunk of them was removed and shipped to Greece. It’s clear they should go back.

Elias’ clients have a similar claim, and when he confesses – or is forced to confess – his agenda to Catriona, she quickly understands. This where the whole Peregrin backstory has relevance. It is explained that Catriona helped Peregrin not only because she was attracted to him, but because she thought he was in the right.

As I said, this whole controversy didn’t particularly resonate with me, but this book, in which the arguments are laid out, and the Western arrogance and acquisitiveness laid bare – we can take care of these things better than you – convinced me.

Because this is a feminist story, the roles are reversed and it is Catriona, with her ingenuity and her connections, that saves the day. Elias is mad because she didn’t confide in him before going ahead – although she didn’t because she knew suspicion would fall on him. (I frankly don’t see why she should apologise). Also, when Elias leaves it is Catriona who chases him across the oceans to an unknown land.

Elias is essentially a refugee, and the bombardment of Gaza made it all the more poignant reading the novel at this time, especially towards the end when Catriona is in hometown. Dunmore has done a great job in choosing a hero from outside the comfort zone of the Western world and making him work spectacularly. Yes, Elias has acquired the trappings of the English gentleman but as he explains at an awkward dinner party, he is very much from his mountain back home. To himself, he admits, that he is forever adrift, never quite at home anywhere.

Catriona’s objections to Elias are not cultural differences – she speaks Arabic, for one – but fear of what marriage and children will demand of her: compromise of her intellectual ambitions, even though she has three friends who have been through exactly this journey and found their own path to balancing the demands of head and heart.

We meet these friends again, of course. There is a subplot about the need to rescind the writ of restitution, which forces women back to their husbands. We get to meet Annabelle, Lucinda and Hattie again, update ourselves on where they are in their lives, and see them work together and support each other. If I have a quibble here it is that Annabelle and the duke are somewhat neglected (just like the duke in the Bridgerton series when the Rege-Jean Page departed after the first season), except towards the very end – when there is an off note (for me) when Annabelle asks the duke to take care of some loose ends in their plan for her, and he preens.

I am an ardent fan of Catriona – of all these women – and I was so looking forward to this book, but it didn’t engross me like the other three. Maybe I read it at the wrong time, when I had too much going on. I appreciated it, and enjoyed it, but I did not drown in it.

What I kept going back to reread was the epilogue in which the four extraordinary women get together to watch the culmination of their struggles – women gaining the right to vote. They are in a cavalcade with their children, and grandchildren. There is a poignant moment when Annabelle returns to the spot where it all started with her handing a pamphlet to Sebastian Devereux and her son acknowledges that this is her victory day.

Indeed, but now all children cared to understand their mother’s battles

I wish there was more of the series (a queer Peregrin novella, anyone?), but I also feel a sense of completion that is rare.

Have you read the series? Did this last novel live up to your expectations?

1940s Bridget Jones?

Title: Dear Mrs Bird
Author: AJ Pearce
Published: April 2018, Scribner

It’s 1940 in London and the bombs are raining down. Emmeline (shades of Pankhurst?) Lake dreams of being a Lady War Correspondent, and is astonished to be recruited by the London Evening Chronicle. Except that it turns out that her job is typing up letters for a very traditional agony aunt to answer.

The best advice from Mr Collins:

Find out what you’re good at, Miss Lake, and then get even better. That’s the key.

and

Just do what you can as well as your can. I promise you one day it will be worthwhile.

The redoubtable Mrs Bird refuses to entertain questions that deal with any Unpleasantness – affairs, sex, and the like – but Emmy finds herself unable to let these cries for help go unanswered. What it turns out she is rather good at is dispensing sensible and compassionate advice to difficult questions.

I had always thought the proper war action was reported in the newspapers. The battles and enemy casualties and important announcements by politicians and leaders. I had wanted to be part of that. Now I began to think I had been wrong. The Government was always saying everyone at home was vital to the war effort, and needed to keep supporting our lads and get on with normal life as if nothing was different, so Adolf wouldn’t think he was getting us down. And we should be chipper and stoic and jolly good sorts and wear lipstick and look nice for when the men were on leave and not cry or be dreary when they went off to fight again. And of course I agreed with that, of course.
But what about when things got difficult or went wrong? The papers didn’t mention women like the ones who wrote to Mrs Bird. Women whose worlds had been turned upside down by the war, who missed their husbands, or got lonely and fell in love with the wrong man …Who was supporting them?

Emmy has some experience with this herself. Her own fiance, away at war, falls in love with someone else. She is upset, but not devastated:

as Mother always said, Granny didn’t spend half her life chaining herself to railings for today’s woman to moon around waiting for some chap to look after her. Quite.

So it was shades of La Pankhurst in our protagonist’s name then. Emmy is determined that she is done with love, but her best friend and housemate Bunty is having none of it.

It is when Bunty tries to set up Emmy that the novel veers into chick lit territory, and Emmy seemed to me quite similar to Bridget of the diary fame. The awkward meeting with Mr Collins and his brother is truly hilarious writing. The friendship between Rmmy and Bunty is charming, even if I felt their falling out coming together again was a bit contrived.

Emmy may be alive during the war years – and the scenes from the fire service she volunteers at shows that those back home were doing dangerous work in service of the war effort too – but just like Bridget she’s just a woman trying to be taken seriously in her career and bumbling around the dating scene.

Of course, it all comes to a head. Emmy answering letters on the sly is discovered, but this is a comedy, not a tragedy, so all’s well that ends well.

Mary Balogh’s mistresses

In Mary Balogh’s Slightly Dangerous in the Bedwyn saga, the Duke of Bewcastle’s mistress died and he was searching for another one, but the woman he chose (Christine) refused the deal he offered. He ended up realising he was in love with her and marrying her.

In Evie Dunmore’s Bringing Down the Duke, Sebastian realises he’s in love with Annabelle, but marrying her seems to be an impossibility, but again she refuses to be his mistress.

But what if she hadn’t refused? Dukes don’t marry their mistresses right?

In Mary Balogh’s More Than a Mistress, they do. The plot device could have descended into sordidness (even Jocelyn Dudley, Duke of Tresham, acknowledges this). But somehow Balogh made it work.

Jane Ingleby is a woman on the run, and she finds herself running into Tresham in the midst of a duel, and then ending up nursing him when he was shot and finally agreeing to be his mistress because what other option does she have.

Something similar happens in Patricia Gaffney’s To Have and to Hold, but that novel, which I found unputdownable, was really on the line. Balogh ensures she’s safely across it by foregrounding consent all the way. It works.

No Man’s Mistress, which focuses on Ferdinand Dudley, Tresham’s brother, had great potential. He rides into a town to take over a house he won in a bet and realises that it is occupied – by the country wench he kissed the night before. There is a battle of wills as neither is willing to move out.

Going by its premise, the novel could have been great but then descended into too much nautanki. It also stretches the bounds of credibility that a duke’s brother could marry a well known courtesan and rescue her reputation by proclaiming the sins of her tormentor in the street, lady or not.

After No Man’s Mistress, I was tempted to quit the series, but I did love Jocelyn and Ferdinand’s sister Angeline (I kept picturing Helena Bonham Carter in this role) so plunged into The Secret Mistress, and I loved. The narrative is reminiscent of Emma if it was Emma who was pursuing Knightley. There is even a bit of matchmaking gone wrong as she insists on putting Edward and his bestie Eunice together despite the stirrings of her own heart.

What do you think of the mistress trope? Does it work for you?

A sliver of Mary Balogh’s Bedwyns

I was craving me some Bedwyn drama, and realised I hadn’t read the novella about Christine’s sister Eleanor who had vowed not to marry after her fiance died in the war.

Once Upon a Dream contains two novellas: one by Mary Balogh, and another by Grace Burrowes.

In both, not-so-young women encounter men and their children on a journey. They hit it off with the children. There is instant chemistry with the man. They meet again at a house party.

One man is a despairing but indulgent papa, the other sterner and a bit distant.

Honestly, I picked this up more for the Duke of Bewcastle and Christine, and it was charming to revisit them. I enjoyed Bewcastle’s interactions with Eleanor.

I started out liking Grace Burrowes’ novella better – Anne Faraday is the daughter of a wealthy banker who is sort of shunned by society because most gentlemen are in her father’s debt, she runs into the very toplofty Duke of Sedgemere who takes to her. However, then they seemed to get obsessed with kissing and kept talking about how much they wanted to kiss each other, and I got fed up.

Ingredients of a satisfying historical romance

Title: The Duchess War
Author: Courtney Milan
Published: December 2018, self-published

Dukes who don’t want to be dukes.

Nice girls who are really tigers in a cage.

Cold-hearted Duchesses who are really romantics.

Self-serving fathers.

Friends who will stand by each other. 

A Pride and Prejudice reference.

A betrayal of a dear love and a friend.

What more do you need? Okay, I did struggle to get into this initially. But then that’s me, and there’s no accounting for my ever-changing tastes. When I did get into it, I enjoyed it.